
The first problem is the order in which I chose to paint the layers of the scene. I did it completely backwards: first the arch, then the wall behind the arch, then the field and mountains and finally the sky. I've since realized that it works best to paint the bottom layer first and to paint more of each layer than you expect to be visible when it is covered by the subsequent layer. The result in this painting is bits of white around the arch where I tried to carefully add in sky or background without painting over my arch. Bits of white canvas peeking through are very distracting in my opinion. Like a boom mic showing in a movie, it shatters the illusion that you are viewing reality. Every painting that I do now has a first layer of sky and a black shadow of what is going to be in the foreground. This ensures that there will be no white canvas peeking through at the end.
The second problem was that I went way overboard trying to get defined boundaries between the rock layers. I used painter's tape to make sure that one layer didn't bleed into another, but this restricted my ability to depict the actual shape of the rocks. Currently, I've gone to the other extreme and completely dropped noticeable stratification in favor of trying to show the shape of the stone. In reality the divisions between layers can be very noticeable, abruptly going from white to red and back. I'd like to get back to showing this, but find a more subtle way to do it.
The third problem is that I didn't do my research. At the time, I had never been to delicate arch and had no idea what the surroundings looked like. I found a few pictures of the arch and guessed on most of the rest. As a result I've added a strangely sloped wall behind the arch which slopes the other way in reality. I've flattened the field behind that and moved the La Sal mountain range at least 100 miles westward. Currently, if I'm trying to paint a scene that I haven't yet visited, I'll find as many photos as I can. Not just of the subject, but of the surrounding area. I'll look at satellite images of the area to figure out where that mountain range in the background really is and find out what kind of stone the formation is made from. When I do visit an area, I'll take lots of pictures of the surroundings just so that I can recall the scene more accurately later. The lack of a third dimension in a photo forces you to fake depth perception and can fool you into thinking foreground objects are part of the background. This makes pictures taken from different angles important to getting the scene right.
Mr. Owen I am doing a research project on you and your art work i was wondering when you were born and if i could get your email that would be great. Your art is truly magical and has influenced me very much
ReplyDeletePoke fan, you can click on my profile at the top right of the page and click to contact me through email. I was born in 1984 though. Send me an email and I can help you with anything else you need!
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